By Yunus Ahmed-Khan
Final Pitch For Final Idea Video + Reflection
- If you were to reconsider your option of promoting your adverts on BCC (Due to the channel not being suitable for adverts like this) what channel would you choose to portray your adverts?
- What happens if you do not have the spinning equipment to help put together your advert?
- How are you going to use the green screen to make your TV advert better?
- How are you going to make sure that your adverts is not going to infringe upon legal and ethical considerations?
Legal and Ethical Considerations with my final pitch
- An accurate description of the product or service
- Legal - Making sure that the advert is showing all the criteria.
- Decent - Whether the advert is worth showing.
- Truthful/honest - Whether the content is telling the truth or not.
- Socially responsible - Meaning that it will show only legal behaviour not illegal behaviour.
- Include false or deceptive messages
- Leaving out important information
- Using aggressive sales techniques
- Food
- Alcohol
- Beauty products
- Environmentally friendly products
- Medicines
- Tabacco
- The Committee of Advertising Practice (CAP) - This covers all non-broadcasting advertising.
- The Broadcast Committee of Advertising Practice code (BCAP) - These covers all broadcasting advertising.
- ASA - Advertising Standards Authority
- Ofcom
- The British Board of Film Classification
Risk Assessment
Hazzard | Risk Rating | Controls |
Having equipment lying around and could trip over it. | Medium | Tidy the equipment and safely store it away to reduce injuries |
Other students can come into the room while filming with the green screen | Medium | Place a sign on the door to ensure that students know that I am filming my adverts |
The background of the green screen may not be cleaned and can affect the filming and editing process | High | I will need to check the green screen in the morning before shooting my advert. This will allow me to ensure that it is possible to film efficiently. |
Radio and shooting (TV Advertisement) script
Story Title: Cadbury Dairy Milk & Oreo - “Twice the joy”
Script:
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Narrative: Have you tasted Oreo biscuits?
Narrative: Have you tried Cadbury Dairy Milk Chocolate Bar?
Narrative: Well, I have good news......
Narrative: There is a new product available which provides you with the energy you need.
Narrative: This product is called the Dairy Milk Oreo.
Narrative: This beautiful product will bring together two flavours that will allow you to have the best of both worlds.
Narrative: It is available now nationwide...
Narrative: What's stopping you. Go and try it out now.
Narrative: It's "Twice the joy"
During this radio advert there are not going to be much visual effects. This is due to the advert going to be on the radio and will only project the voice. Therefore when it comes to FX there is not going to be much effect. However when referring to the music elements, there are going to be some. This helps the audience get more attracted to the advert and make them go and pick up the chocolate.
During this advert there are going to be elements of music. This is because it is needed in my opinion so that the audience is kept engaged. Therefore I am going to use the music from a certain video that Cadbury has used. I will reference that at the end.
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00:05 00:07 00:10 00:15 00:20 00:22 00:24 00:26 00:28 | Narrative: Have you tasted Oreo biscuits? Narrative: Have you tried Cadbury Dairy Milk Chocolate Bar? Narrative: Well, I have good news...... Narrative: There is a new product available which provides you with the energy you need. Narrative: This product is called the Dairy Milk Oreo. Narrative: This beautiful product will bring together two flavours that will allow you to have the best of both worlds. Narrative: It is available now nationwide... Narrative: What's stopping you. Go and try it out now. Narrative: It's "Twice the joy" | During this radio advert there are not going to be much visual effects. This is due to the advert going to be on the radio and will only project the voice. Therefore when it comes to FX there is not going to be much effect. However when referring to the music elements, there are going to be some. This helps the audience get more attracted to the advert and make them go and pick up the chocolate. | During this advert there are going to be elements of music. This is because it is needed in my opinion so that the audience is kept engaged. Therefore I am going to use the music from a certain video that Cadbury has used. I will reference that at the end. |
Shooting (TV Advertisement) Script.
Cadbury Dairy Milk & Oreo - “Twice the joy” Script | ||||||||||
Shot No. | Location | Shot Type | Angle | Movement | Duration | Sound notes (music, dialogue, VO, sound effects) | Description of Action & Character Notes | Titles: Graphics & Supers | Lighting Notes | Location & Prop notes |
1. | School | Short | Knee level shot | Circular | 10 seconds | Voice over asking rhetorical questions about the chocolate bar. The music will be used from the previous advert, if not then I will be creating my own. The dialogue has been made myself. | During this scene there will be the prop of the chocolate bar that will be displayed in the centre of the camera shot. It will be circulating around so that customers can see what the chocolate bar is going to look like. The voiceover will be using the script provided to help get the message across. | The graphics of the video will be in 4K resolution. There is not going to be supers until the end of the advert. | It is going to have a flash bang effect to attract the audience | The location will be in school but will be using the green screen to find the perfect background when editing. The props will be the chocolate bar, this means that I will need to purchase the chocolate bar for it to be used in the production of the advert. |
2. | School | Short | Knee level shot | Dolly | 10 seconds | Voice over talks about the main ingredients of the chocolate bar. The music will be used from the previous advert, if not then I will be creating my own. The dialogue has been made myself. | During the next scene, the chocolate bar is going to be in the middle but not moving around. Instead of this the chocolate bars main ingredients will be colliding into the chocolate bar. The voiceover will be saying the main ingredients in the chocolate bar while the colliding is taking place. | The graphics of the video will be in 4K resolution. There is not going to be supers until the end of the advert. | It is going to shine on the chocolate bar in the middle | The location will be in school but will be using the green screen to find the perfect background when editing. The props will be the chocolate bar and the ingredients. I will need to get the ingredients and will need to get some equipment to store them and prevent them from doing any damage. |
3. | School | Long | Bird eyes shot | Tilt | 10 seconds | Voice over talking about where you can get the chocolate bar from. The music will be used from the previous advert, if not then I will be creating my own. The dialogue has been made myself. | Finally in this last scene the chocolate bar will be thrown on to the floor surrounded by other chocolate bars to show the new collection to the Cadbury family. This is where the voiceover will end but will say the key message of the chocolate bar. This is “twice the joy” | The graphics of the video will be in 4K resolution. Supers will be placed here. This will source all the legal information and where anything used from another source will be referenced.
| It is going to project its light on everything from the birds eye view angle. | The location will be in school but the background will be surrounded by other chocolate bars that are produced by Cadbury. All I need to do is to purchase those chocolate bars to get the full effect. |
The dialogue/script which will be used for the TV advertisement
Location Recess
Location Recess.
What ideas do you have on where you are going to film?
Why have you chosen these locations and how does it help the audience relate to the chocolate bar?
- When filming inside, I have access to the green screen. This will help me as the background of the chocolate can be anything I would like it to be. This can help me as I can save time and resources.
- When I am filming in the actual school, this can help the younger audience relate to the chocolate bar advert more. The overall message of the chocolate bar is to have a snack on the go but also has a combination of a variety of flavours and shows synergy. This is why this could be a good location to film in.
- When filming in the city of London, this can make the overall advert more interesting. This is due to the audience being filled with suspense. This will make them intrigued and therefore gain an interest in the advert. Therefore the overall audience can increase and therefore the success of the rebranding of the chocolate bar can be more efficient.
- However when filming in a garage could be a good idea. This is can means that more customers and audiences can be drawn into this. The reason for this is that they maybe able to relate to the creation of the Oreo and Cadbury collaborating, because Steve Jobs worked on the original iPhone in a garage. Therefore it will be more appealing to audiences as they knew Steve Jobs and can relate to the chocolate bar advert.
What are the differences of the locations to make the chocolate bar advert?
- 2 of the locations are outside and the other 2 are inside.
- 1 of the locations requires a green screen whereas the rest of them don't need them.
- Each location has a different meaning.
- Each location has a different and unique message to address different audiences.
What is your final ideal location to film this chocolate bar advert?
Rationale for chosen idea
Rationale for chosen idea.
History of the Cadbury Oreo chocolate bar
History of the Cadbury Oreo Chocolate bar
What product have I chosen and why?
the audiences. Furthermore, this product is the combination of 2 products that audiences love to have. This product clearly has an element of synergy. This means that I can get twice as much of the audiences to be watching this advert.
When did Cadbury first launch the product?
meant that the feedback that Cadbury got determined if the product was a success or not. However, due to the rebranding, this chocolate bar has been relaunched continuously over the last few years.
Who do you think is the audience for the product?
because this product is a combination of various flavours that is enjoyed by these specific ages.
Describe the packaging.
and purple colour scheme. This showed the synergy between 2 of the products (Oreo and Cadbury). The current design of the product is a very simplistic view. This was useful as it shows formality and informality to it audiences. In other words, audiences are drawn to pick up this product and eager to take a bite of it.
An example of an old advertisement campaign.
Analyse the advert.
Description of packaging.
Slogan.
Luxury? On the go? Everyday?
Potential Target Audience?
What ideas might you use to keep the brand consistency?
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